>>1918>as you can see now, it's terribleI only see one mistake that you made; there should be a comma between "topic" and "mods."
Also, you seem to have fairly a fairly good grasp of the English language, especially if you aren't a native speaker. My advice? Read. I personally prefer fiction. Perhaps Eragon or The Ranger's Apprentice, for they are both good stories where the author throws in some longer and more ornate words here and there.